# Vad tycks om min engelska text?
Author: [Borttaget]

_Jag ska hålla en kort föreläsning om en uppfinning på torsdag. Vill gärna få till den här föreläsningen då jag är såååå dålig på engelska. Det här är hur den ser ut nu._

"It is not quite sure who really was the one who created the first microscope . Some say that it was the Dutchmen Hans and Zacharias Jansen (father and son who invented the microscope around the end of the 16 century.  
This was whriten down not until about 1650 by Zacharias himself, but that statement seemed unlikely since he was born around 1590.  
  
Another person who may have been the inventor of the microscope is Galileo Galilei. He is said to have created it 1609 and used a concave and a convex lens. He got the idea after hearing about experiments done by other people. Cornelius Drebbel, better known as the submarine's inventor, invented ten years later a microscope using two convex lenses.

The first microscope in Sweden, was bought in the beginning of the 20 century by Sandvikens Ironworks, now Sandvik AB. It was a secondhand microscope bought in the U.S. There are now in Sandviken like a museum object."

Vad tycks?

## Comment 1
Author: Woodland

**Good!**

Just a few mistakes.

_It is not quite sure who really was the one who created the first microscope ._

_Better -  It is not quite certain who invented the first microscope._

T_his was whriten down_ correct - written

t_hat statement seemed unlikely_ - that statement seems unlikely

T_here are now in Sandviken like a museum object."_

They're now in Sandviken as museum objects.

Ha' det!

## Comment 2
Author: [Borttaget]

Tack!!!![Kyss](http://tonaringar.ifokus.se/js/lib/tiny_mce/plugins/emotions/img/smiley-kiss.gif "Kyss")

## Comment 3
Author: [Borttaget]

Jag ändrar felen\* jag hittar ![Glad](http://tonaringar.ifokus.se/js/lib/tiny_mce/plugins/emotions/img/smiley-smile.gif "Glad") \*_det är inte nödvändigtvis riktiga fel, men det låter bättre och mer naturligt engelskt så som jag ändrar det._

"It is not quite sure**/certain** who really was the one who created the first microscope . Some say that it was the Dutchmen Hans and Zacharias Jansen (father and son who invented the microscope around the end of the 16**th** century.  
This was **not written** down until about 1650 by Zacharias himself, but **the** (låter bättre då du pratar om det själva "statement") statement seems unlikely since he was born around 1590.  
  
Another person who may have been the inventor of the microscope is Galileo Galilei. He is said to have created it **in** 1609, and used a concave and a convex lens. He got the idea after hearing about experiments done by other people. Cornelius Drebbel, better known as the submarine's inventor, invented ten years later, a microscope using two convex lenses.

The first microscope in Sweden, was bought in the beginning of the 20**th** century by Sandvikens Ironworks, now Sandvik AB. It was a secondhand microscope bought in the U.S. **It is** (om du pratar om mikroskopet) now **kept in a museum** (vore kul om du kunde namnge muséet) **in** Sandviken ."

## Comment 4
Author: Perly

Behövs även avslutning på första parantesen (:

## Comment 5
Author: Woodland

If it's too perfect he/she might get in trouble with the teacher.  ![Flört](http://tonaringar.ifokus.se/js/lib/tiny_mce/plugins/emotions/img/smiley-wink.gif "Flört")

## Comment 6
Author: [Borttaget]

#5 But how are you supposed to learn if you don't get help? ![Tungan ute](http://tonaringar.ifokus.se/js/lib/tiny_mce/plugins/emotions/img/smiley-tongue-out.gif "Tungan ute") Språk är extra viktigt att man får hjälp med, för lär man sig något en gång så lär man sig det för livet. :)

## Comment 7
Author: Woodland

I agree. You're correct that help is necessary.

I was thinking more on the lines of the text and made my judgment on how far along in the school system Hamster might be.    A teacher would notice right away if the work was above the normal ability and question it.  I know I did.

## Comment 8
Author: [Borttaget]

#7 Hmm.. yeah ok, I suppose you're right. ![Flört](http://tonaringar.ifokus.se/js/lib/tiny_mce/plugins/emotions/img/smiley-wink.gif "Flört")